Thursday, August 1, 2013

My creative story

< Lost in a Sea>
 This is 2050, when the smart technique is at its peak. Humans can go anywhere without any equipment: underwater, in the sky, anywhere. The cities are both in the land, underwater, and in the sky. Well, there was a girl, full of excitement to adventure, living in the underwater city, Aqua. Her name was Ally. 

"Com'on! Let's go out!" Ally yelled to her brother, Henry. "Don't run! You have to take care of yourself. And come home until 6'o clock!" Mom yelled behind her.  "Okay, mom! Ally! I'm stuck!" Henry shouted, stuck in the rock. 
Ally run and picked Henry up. "Phew. That really was a good job, huh?" "I'm sorry. I can't manage it." Henry said with a disappointed face. "Well, never mind. Let's go outside!" She opened the door of the Aqua city. It was the first time  she went outside the city without parents. "Wow..." Ally said. "Awesome!" Henry shouted, running to outside. Ally followed him. "Where should we go first? Seaworld? " Henry said with jolly. "No..." Ally said, staring something. "What?" Henry looked up. He stared at something. Ally said," Marin city... I always wanted to go there." Henry said, "But that city is too big. Don't you heard a story about Anne who went to Marin city and got lost? It's too dangerous." "I don't care. It's the only chance to go there. I'll go." Ally said, walking to the gate of Marin city."Okay..." Henry said, following her. Ally opened the gate slowly. 
 "Ahh!" They shouted. "Oww." They said. " Where am I?" Ally said. "I don't know. I'm scared. It's dark, and cold." Henry said. "Look! There is a light. That means we can go out." Ally ran to the light. Henry followed her. Suddenly, it became bright. "Look! There's a police! We can ask him, the way to home!" Ally shouted, running to the police. Ally asked, "Excuse me, sir. What is the way to Aqua city?" "Aqua city?", said police officer. "Hmm... Wait a minute. I don't know exactly, but I think you can follow the blue road." "Okay. Thank you!" Henry bowed at him. "Let's go! To the  Aqua city!" Ally shouted, walking at the blue road. During the way to Aqua city, there was a Whale city. "Look! It's the Whale city! We're almost near! Yeah!" "Are you going to the Aqua city?" The strange voice came near Ally. "Who is it?" Ally said. "I'm from Aqua city, too. You may heard of me. My name is Anne." "Really?" Henry said. "Then let's go together!"

Click here for ending 1

Click here for ending 2

Click here for ending 3
  

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